When pitching to a company like Microsoft, you need to think big. Your solutions need to consider the entire world. Our team only collected research on dancers and motor learning. However, we should have done a better job of explaining how our product could work with any type of motor learning, not just dance.
As much as Microsoft liked our idea, it could have been stronger. In the future, I'll be more cognizant of the audience I am presenting to.
Various other areas we could have used our design to solve for